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The Dreamer's Keeper - haiku
by Christel Crewsthe moon pierces through
wisps of clouds to shine upon
air castle lovers 02/21/2007
Author's Note: for Lori Blair - here's your piece about nature and love.. a perfect pair, if you ask me! :)
Posted on 02/21/2007
Copyright © 2026 Christel Crews
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/22/07 at 03:31 AM I like the image. Short, very wonderfully captured. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/22/07 at 12:59 PM I really like the power of the word "pierces." Quite effective in helping the reader to visualize the moon and the castle in the clouds. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 04/03/07 at 03:38 AM Christel, this is so romantic. Yes, any time the moon is involved, it has to be. Just a whisp of romance to pierce my heart.
~Chelle~ |
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