| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/12/07 at 02:50 PM I think it's in pretty good shape right now. I know I was able to relate to it quite well. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/12/07 at 07:53 PM It was good to begin with, but I think you've definately raised the stakes a little here. You've given it a little more meat, and that's never a bad thing. |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 02/13/07 at 01:10 AM yep, i have mornings like this! i need that caffine before anything else!!! |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/14/07 at 03:12 PM LOVED this....I also live on coffee :-) I am glad to know I'm not the oonly one. I also loved the element of suprise. Great work all around. Very nice read (with my coffee). |
| Posted by Becca Kinser on 02/15/07 at 02:19 PM Holy crap, here here. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/26/07 at 02:32 PM Well done! |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 08/15/07 at 05:26 PM haha i have found my fellow soul-sister! we are coffaholics! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 02/27/09 at 03:43 PM akln to your beloved coffee, this has great bouquet
written all over its face, in addition, the
great ending and unexpected, which is the point
of drinking and reading both in the first place. surprise surprise as sayeth, Mr. Pyle, Gomer by any other name, good to the last drop. and what a goodly drop it was? that ending. |
