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Perdoe-me

by Uriel Tovar

I fell asleep
on my 21st birthday
under an old wood table
drapped in a thick
purple
cloth.

I held my breath and
sank into
forever.

01/19/2007

Posted on 01/19/2007
Copyright © 2025 Uriel Tovar

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 01/21/07 at 10:55 PM

I am not sure why but this scares me, all I can see is a casket. I like the fright though.

Posted by Paul Lastovica on 01/21/07 at 11:38 PM

like a dream that comes on suddenly, deeply, and without chance of waking anytime soon.

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