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II.

by Jolie Jordan

I can picture your face in the palm of my hand
my neck crooked and your heart bloodred
as I study the space between your lips-

angelface,
you mean more to me than I will let you know.

01/05/2007

Author's Note: 2 of 2.

Posted on 01/05/2007
Copyright © 2026 Jolie Jordan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Laura Doom on 04/29/07 at 06:45 PM

I read something here last week in which lips were described as 'parentheses' - so, this fills that not-so-mysterious orifice. I & II - the explicit & the implicit...seems like appropriately contrasting atmosphere/imagery to me, but then I don't know that much :)

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