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Fruit

by Tony Whitaker

Fruit on the fruit tree
When it’s ripe it’s juicy.
So is the love between you and me.
Fruit on a fruit tree,
A bee in the clover
Busy making honey,
Going buzz, buzz, buzz.
Fruit on the fruit tree
When it’s ripe it’s juicy

12/16/2006

Posted on 12/16/2006
Copyright © 2026 Tony Whitaker

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/16/06 at 03:00 PM

Great use of vivid, quick imagery, and I also really liked how you put this together. Great work, man.

Posted by Jody Pratt on 12/10/10 at 04:35 AM

Such a positive poem. Yet it has such a negative undertone of the possibility of the fruit falling.

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