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FALLING (redux)

by Terry Olynik

A hushed Autumn descends, apologetically,
Suspending the flow of life-giving juices.
Leaves unhinge, their legions
Tumbling, crisp-veined corpses,
Imparting backbone and velvet
To the lung- caressing air.

The smiling Sun King, his potency waning,
Accepts his reduced workload with grace and relief.
Sun-baked creatures stir instinctively,
Earth's nose-twitching handmaidens -
Sensing the mantle's dwindling energy
Through thickening paw pads.

A million tiny deaths, seen and sensed,
Unfolding in ordered orchestration -
Nature's unforgiving technicolor prelude
To ordained, habitual rebirth.
A fitting, finite requiem
Rehearsed through all eternity.

10/14/2006

Author's Note: Sweater weather.

Posted on 10/14/2006
Copyright © 2025 Terry Olynik

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/15/06 at 03:34 AM

You got that right. Good stuff.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/29/06 at 10:44 PM

A most welcome different look at the changing of seasons.

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