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TREADMILL
by Terry OlynikThe last time
I ever saw her
I told her
It was sweat,
Sweat in my eye,
I just got off
The treadmill.
It wasn't a tear,
The last time
I saw her. 10/02/2006 Posted on 10/03/2006
Copyright © 2025 Terry Olynik
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 10/03/06 at 05:26 AM Very nice, Terry. Simple, no frills. And the 3-line statement at the end - is this to convince the reader or the speaker? Well done. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/03/06 at 12:12 PM Thank goodness those days are behind most of us emotionally challenged he-men. Nicely stated Terry. |
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