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Holding Hands

by Uriel Tovar

we were both calcium
but you tasted like hard rock
candy.
i loved you just like the cavities
your lips left.

10/01/2006

Author's Note: finished

Posted on 10/02/2006
Copyright © 2025 Uriel Tovar

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 10/02/06 at 05:38 AM

What an image! It almost gave me a tooth ache.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/03/06 at 12:14 PM

Yeah, a truly clever piece. Well done!

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