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adolescent party games

by Jared Fladeland

i've got sins on my side.



What a bottle spins
it takes for freedom,
and when the open neck
points in your direction:

Will you give me a little kiss?

Turn off the lights
and dance the phonetic alphabet on my tongue.

09/20/2006

Posted on 09/20/2006
Copyright © 2026 Jared Fladeland

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 09/29/06 at 04:57 AM

oh yummy! reminds me of a 7th grade party....spin the bottle, followed by "2 minutes in the closet!" funny, i don't remember it being quite as sensual as you describe. i like your version better!! ;)PK

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 11/11/06 at 05:49 PM

"open neck" is brilliant. Nice work.

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