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The Rain's Turn

by Jacki M Butler

Dark clouds are rolling in
Threatening to spoil our day
Light pitter patter of rain on my back
Driving people from the beach

Rain is picking up, drumming on my brain
The wind begins to howl
The waves start to roar

Time to retreat now
As the storm takes its turn,
Its turn on the beach

09/09/2006

Posted on 09/10/2006
Copyright © 2025 Jacki M Butler

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/19/06 at 01:59 PM

Feel the threat of rain! Catchy, "drumming on the brain". Excellent ending!

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