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a lesson on transcendental meditation

by Jared Fladeland

if I could make a poem

as creative as can be.

but with a spark of emotional honesty.

Then I would be a success.



as creative as can be.
but with a spark of emotional honesty.



if I could make a poem
Then I would be a success.

08/26/2006

Posted on 08/26/2006
Copyright © 2026 Jared Fladeland

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/26/06 at 08:14 PM

Something I think most poets strive for Jared. Well stated! :o)

Posted by Mara Meade on 09/02/06 at 03:33 AM

The circular patterns in this made me dizzy. In other words, PERFECT! ;]

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