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HINDSIGHT

by Terry Olynik

Only later
Did I learn -
When
I bought her
Blue cotton candy
At the carnival
In
What
I thought
Was a gesture
Both
Sentimental
And
Romantic......
She
Actually wanted
A BMW.
A blue
BMW.

08/13/2006

Posted on 08/13/2006
Copyright © 2025 Terry Olynik

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jared Fladeland on 08/13/06 at 06:56 AM

man, i HATE when that happens. stupid people and their wants vs. needs

Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 08/13/06 at 09:01 PM

I love this! Poetry that is straightforward, image laden, economic in word, witty, and truthful all in one piece! Most cool! Well done! - Going on the fav list! - RCat the Amused

Posted by Ann Krischus on 11/24/06 at 07:21 PM

this is good, very good!

Posted by Allison Smith on 06/01/10 at 01:26 AM

Nice :)

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