| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 07/12/06 at 02:02 AM The indescribable sweet-spot that love can be. Just trust in the words...and that the words aren't just words! Well put Charlie! |
| Posted by Lacy D Phillips on 07/12/06 at 02:42 PM Great structure. And you somehow managed to inject sentimentality without spoiling the verse. Good job. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 07/13/06 at 02:09 PM This gets the loved ones attention any time! Perfect, honest, simple.
And great!
You are always able to pull this off...you and your wonderful muse! —Jill |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 07/14/06 at 01:13 AM SWEET! Simply sweet and touching Charles. [;0)~ |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 07/15/06 at 03:51 AM Simple and distilled, Charlie! That is what it's all about, and that's a poetry form in which you excel! MWAH! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/15/06 at 02:34 PM Fine testament to keeping it simple Charlie. I couldn't have said it better. :o) |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 07/16/06 at 12:32 AM Yep, you're a keeper! :) |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/19/06 at 01:48 PM There's no mistaking your love here - nice write!!! |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 07/22/06 at 12:00 PM Lovely |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 07/28/06 at 04:29 AM Charlie, how sweet and straightforward. I'm sure whomever you said them to, like Mother Minshall ;-) enjoys hearing them without end.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Maude Curtis on 03/10/09 at 03:45 PM Those 3 little words can change your whole life and make you young again. Thanks for the read. |
