{ pathetic.org }
 

MR. MATURITY

by Terry Olynik

Yesterday morning
On
My daily walk
I noticed a wheel
(From a child's wagon perhaps)
In the grass
At
The top
Of an extremely
Steep street.

My instant thought
Was
To pick up
This
Rubber and metal wheel
And
Toss it
Full force
Down
That sharp slope.
To see
How far
It would go
(What it might hit).

Before
I could bend down
It
Struck me -
I am
Over fifty years old.
At
This age
Others
Have become
Captains of industry
Distinguished contributors
To
Mankind's mark.
Grandfathers.
I sheepishly resisted
The raging impulse
To
Roll that beckoning wheel.

Several times
Last night
I thought about
That wheel.
How
It might have rolled.
Gaining velocity
As
It barreled
Downhill.
Today
On my
Morning walk
I was
Mildly suprised
To see that wheel
In
The same spot
Just off the sidewalk.

It's not there anymore.

06/14/2006

Author's Note: Covered two-hundred feet in five seconds.

Posted on 06/14/2006
Copyright © 2025 Terry Olynik

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/15/06 at 01:15 AM

Such a universal urge to roll the wheel down, down, down. It was definitely your wheel!! Fun read.

Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 06/16/06 at 12:47 PM

Fabulous! I'm so glad you gave in to the demands of your inner child, and even happier that you shared the experience so craftfully here.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/16/09 at 12:29 PM

I think everyone has the urge to pkay "kick the can", or in your case, roll the wheel. We never reallly grow up and thank G-d for that! Loved the images in your "story" Good write and very enjoyable read!

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 10/03/11 at 02:11 AM

Love this very much...deeper meanings for me, anyway.

Posted by E. A. Pugh on 10/03/11 at 05:22 AM

Yeah!

Return to the Previous Page
 

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2025 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)