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In Brighton (2 Tanka)

by Julie Adams



around the green trim
I followed a young turtle
king of the garden
lost in the dense foliage
solitude dances with wind

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through my hair, gently
the beach oxygen wiggles
between locks and thoughts
in deep breaths, the children laugh
dragging buckets to the shore

02/10/2006

Posted on 02/10/2006
Copyright © 2026 Julie Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jim Benz on 02/16/06 at 01:16 AM

I'll agree with Agnes. very nice.

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