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This Is My First Five Seven Five Haiku
by Charles E MinshallGlowing bright dawn sun
Sparkling dew upon the lawn
Slippering for news. 01/30/2006 Author's Note: The first Haiku I wrote....CharMin
Posted on 01/30/2006
Copyright © 2026 Charles E Minshall
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| Posted by Mara Meade on 01/30/06 at 08:18 PM -chuckling- Yeah, it may be beautiful, but just let me get my newspaper without falling down....! Funny funny! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 01/30/06 at 08:33 PM Oh, Charlie Boy, you definitely have an affinity for ku. Opening with the natural and subtle beauty of daybreak, inter-connecting with seasonal awareness and pulling it all together with an amazing last line to portray the human element in raw form. Pass the sports page will ya buddy.
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| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 01/31/06 at 01:11 AM I was walking through this c-a-r-e-f-u-l-l-y and loved evry movement. 'Slippering' has me think of wearing my morning slippers...which I try my dernst to wear all day. This haiku is morning lovely! —Jill |
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