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"Dance With Me"
by Max PhineasSweet tunes carry me to the floor
You chuckle from your seat, intent on remaining there.
Come dance with me.
Rhythms course through my veins-
Who needs blood, anyway?
No one's watching
So let's go, go, go!
Shuffling back to you
Extending my hand
Leading you off to the wooden floor
of my living room.
Our hearts pressed together
Creating a new rhythm.
Keep dancing.
No one's watching.
11/04/2005
Author's Note: I've decided I don't like it. I had inspiration at first but it leaked out of my ears before I could type it.
Posted on 11/05/2005
Copyright © 2026 Max Phineas
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rebecca Lin on 11/05/05 at 02:51 AM aww I think it's great! |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 07/31/08 at 08:37 PM i know the feeling. it's so disappointing when a brilliant just leaks out. but this isn't so bad. so don't get down on yourself about it :) |
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