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Desensitization

by Kim Bennett

What if you could only look at the world through a small sphere?
And in the circle a tree stands in its autumn gown
One branch naked.
And the others covered in random pigments of the season.
Silhouette against the pale sapphire sky.
Oceanic movements pushing large sails between spaces of limbs
Past the lines of trees, a procession of separate shades
Coloured by fire because the sun illuminates only them
And darkens the sheltered forest,
As if to explain the concept of shadow.

And in the tree the leaves shiver,
A constant ballet with the wind.
And the energy of our star reflects to spotlight these dancers,
Blinding the audience.

But would the spectators view these organisms as alive?
Or as merely flesh of a colossal creature?
Would they see the luminous colours of the season and think of death
As humans do?

Would they wonder why one skeleton limb has lost its vibrant covering?
Will their mouths gasp in horror, bottom lip puckered and quivering at the sight
Of black migrating birds?
Who swarm this large, beautiful, breathing creature
Screeching their battle cry as one, as the audience cries, and cover ears and eyes
As a brilliant piece of flesh falls into the blue, twisting in pain, and then into nothingness
Below the circle.
And the audience descends, hiding beneath the round window
Understanding why one branch quivers naked,
Refusing to look back at the world overflowing with tremendous cruelty and death.

10/19/2005

Author's Note: Basically it's just an image I saw when I was doing homework in a park. But it's also about how cruel our world is. We read about bombings everyday and we've become so used to it, it doesn't even matter to us any more than watching birds land on a tree. And from an ousider point of view, that's insane. To watch all of these little things attack for no reason at all is shocking to someone just getting a taste of earth. But not to us.

Posted on 10/19/2005
Copyright © 2025 Kim Bennett

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jersey D Gibson on 10/20/05 at 12:55 AM

Wow... this poem shows the callow causticness we've inherited. We kill hundreds and cheer, and mourn the loss of one. We fight for the rights of murderers, and doubt the blessings of saints. In times of need, people display the worse we have to offer, yet in times of horror, compassion shines true. Where have our souls gone?

yer pal

Jersey

Posted by Jim Benz on 10/20/05 at 05:20 AM

This is very well said. One wonders if the inexplicable brutality of humans is as unchangeable as the seasons - I prefer to think not, but too much evidence seems to point to the contrary. Anyway, this is a truly beautiful poem.

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