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mind (a broken record)
by Uriel Tovarthe cold
heartless spike
pierces through
my temple
spilling out
the empty thoughts
and regrets
held on to.
in a year or two it will be over anyways
in a year or two
in a year or two
in a year
the room isn't as small as
it was
when i fell into
it
it
fell into
into.
'though i can't see
you anymore
i still struggle to cut my eye
eye
i open
my iris
open with my finger nail
nail
-------------------------------we
-----------follow
--------------------anywhere
the cold stainless steal
spike
sssss pp iiikkee e e e
spikee
e
stainless stea
stel
steel
spike
er
aaaassss.....
......................es
me
e
me
o
ry
foc
focu
fuco
focussssssssssss
s
sssss
hard--e-e---r
to foc
us
now.
09/08/2005 Author's Note: my sister doesn't like it
i don't think i do either.
Posted on 09/08/2005
Copyright © 2025 Uriel Tovar
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 09/10/05 at 06:47 PM Mind indeed is a broken record, better just to use it when needed and then put it down to rest as any tool when its overuse just becomes wasteful and abusive. As for the style, I too could do without the extra letters, though I do get your meaning :-) |
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