your whisper in the morning made itÂ’s parting in a song hovering just above a dream on the fermata the notes and tones copyright themselves automatically in me enunciating the beats of my heart on the fermata no one could have taken me that far as you did in one breath making peace of the war inside bringing dream into reality on the coat tails on the fermata on the fermata of you
05/10/2005
Posted on 05/10/2005Copyright © 2026 Scott Cadence
Scott, I enjoyed reading this different type of love poem. The elements you combined, the word "fermata," and the beginning whisper, which travels right through the poem. Wonderful. ;-) ~Chelle~