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Raining
by Uriel TovarI met you yesterday
Inside a phone booth
--Flooded--
Rust stains
Kissing the sides
(red to brown to red.) 02/28/2005 Posted on 02/28/2005
Copyright © 2025 Uriel Tovar
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 03/01/05 at 04:21 AM Uriel, I enjoyed reading your poem. Combining the colors with the phone booth, just suggested love without saying it. Great work!
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Scott Cadence on 03/05/05 at 10:28 PM This is beautiful. |
| Posted by Jolie Jordan on 07/05/16 at 07:31 AM <3 |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/05/16 at 02:39 PM So much unsaid here, I like where this takes my mind. Loved "rust stains kissing the sides." |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 07/06/16 at 02:07 AM Six lines that say much! Nice!!
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