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The Whiten Version Two

by Charles E Minshall

Around noon night
In the dawning dark,
'Tis the silent tapping of the whiten
That awakens all who sleep through it,
To always remember nevermore again
.

02/10/2005

Author's Note: The whiten is of course the raven

Posted on 02/11/2005
Copyright © 2026 Charles E Minshall

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/11/05 at 04:33 PM

Fun, fine tribute to one of my favorite writers. Kudos Charlie. :o)

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 02/11/05 at 06:34 PM

I think you are starting something here....

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 02/11/05 at 08:42 PM

clever clever... i see the raven in a new light... blessings...

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/13/05 at 01:11 AM

For some reason this reminds me of a children's picture book I used to read to the younger kids at school. For the life of me I can't think of the title though I can see some of the pictures and the story in my mind. It is the story of a fox who visits a farm on a quiet winters night. There is some subconscious connection.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 02/17/05 at 04:46 AM

Ah! What a treat! This is the second Poe-like-Poe-inspired poem I have read tonight (See Andi Badgett's library). I have got to go back and read some of his stuff. He was the first poet and writer I can remember really loving. Your poem has an ominous feel to it and excites the imagination. Very well done, Chaz.

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