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wind

by Uriel Tovar

wind takes form of snake
slithering through the empty
halls of the building.

01/11/2005

Posted on 01/11/2005
Copyright © 2025 Uriel Tovar

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Melissa Arel on 01/12/05 at 05:06 PM

Descriptive and vivid! :) Good work

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 01/16/05 at 08:31 AM

I like this - great description and good work. Yes, I can hear the wind as it hisses through the hallway.
~Chelle~

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