| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 07/22/08 at 12:47 PM madeline, congrats on POTD. i like what you've done with this form...haikus are always fun. however, i think with this kind of subject matter, trying to condense it into 17 syllables is too limiting. this is a big topic. maybe you should try fleshing this out in a form with more wiggle room? thanks for sharing your work! | 
