| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/06/03 at 04:36 AM this is wonderful!!!! *huggles her* i love the whole s' thing...i am snowed in today..never going to get this shopping done! |
| Posted by Dana E Brossard on 12/06/03 at 05:54 AM =) Very nice, you did a wonderful job, I like the 'S'Sense |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 12/07/03 at 01:52 AM wow, brilliant themed alliteration. Bravo! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/07/03 at 09:39 PM Suffice to say, the word "s" never sounded better. Excellent seasonal poem! |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/10/03 at 03:08 AM Let's see, how many poetic forms do you display here? Your amazing treasury of images and words live in this piece so naturally and with utter delight. I think this poem just pushed me over the edge from busyness and jobstress into the holiday spirit. |
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 12/10/03 at 03:13 PM Sufferin' sibilance! Try reading this poem in the voice of Sylvester the Cat! Seriously, this is very clever and a delight to read. I especially like the "concrete" arrangement of the tree at the end.... d:-)
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| Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 12/15/03 at 01:55 AM Wonderfully done.. the "S"s sing softly... and I love the concrete ending! |
