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yin-yang (double acrostic).

by Andrew S Adams

Childbirth; we are fetal. we are all there is to wondeR.
An amazing sight, and there is always the inevitablE
Uttering of 'this is one of god's miracleS.
Sure, whatever. these words come easy to all but yoU.
Everyone thinks of the happiness, but you know what helL
Surely will come. you know that all causes must have a resulT.

12/03/2003

Author's Note: the first double acrostic i've ever done.

Posted on 12/04/2003
Copyright © 2025 Andrew S Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 12/04/03 at 02:47 AM

Great work... I attempted one once, and quickly balled it up and threw it away! A few other members have Double Acrostic's posted as well... you all amaze me with your skill and patience!

Posted by Cole Miller on 12/04/03 at 04:28 AM

maybe ya could do the spacing to make the end line up too, kind of like the newspaper does to fill up the columns better. just a thought. way to conquer a tough form.

Posted by Anne Engelen on 12/04/03 at 05:23 AM

I never managed to do a double one. You pulled that one off quite well!

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