| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/23/03 at 07:42 PM Searching and prying is a worthy endeavor... it is interesting you find the answer within. It is very hard to articulate understanding... you do it very well. Thanks for sharing! :) |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/24/03 at 12:28 AM Your poem really speaks to me... especially that second verse. I think your poem was heavensent to me to teach and reaffirm what I have been hearing when I enter the door. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 11/24/03 at 02:06 AM excellent metaphor for our existence... your poetry flows like a blissful river filling the readers soul up with knowledge... blessings... |
| Posted by H.M Stevens on 11/24/03 at 07:03 AM i really enjoyed this poem. And I think it is because I understand most of it but not all of it. |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 11/24/03 at 05:35 PM But Ashok, I always lose my keys. *grin |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 11/24/03 at 05:50 PM It truly made my heart sing to read this. How very wise Ashok... and perseptive. How easily it is achieved when you do at last realize the key... |
| Posted by Siri Lipscomb on 11/25/03 at 02:41 AM Listening is loving, including listening to one's own inner guide... Beautifully expressed. Crisp yet elegant. ~ S |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 12/01/03 at 03:01 PM Congratulations on the Spotlight. Your poem, as usual, is quite thought provoking. The part that had me sitting, thinking, for the longest was your opening... "the doors of perception/have no locks" |
