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by Ken Harnisch

Sometimes

When I think of you

And the promises I made to you

To keep my heart and distance

In their room

It still enflames me

Knowing you are close

And thinking of me hot and just the same

And sometimes, casting caution to the winds

Knowing how life’s zephyrs

Always fly too bloody fast 

I think of casual collisions

And wonder if the fear

You have is real, or just another figment of your mind

But then, the cold and sober thinking

Comes again, and says

She is right, she was always right

And I put the wild thoughts

Back in their room again

The love for you

Always being more than the love of you

In the end.

05/09/1998

Posted on 09/23/2003
Copyright © 2025 Ken Harnisch

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kate Demeree on 09/24/03 at 03:13 PM

Sometimes.... you write great truths, and call them poetry. Sometimes... you write from a place more than the man goes.

Posted by Kate Demeree on 09/24/03 at 03:14 PM

Rereading my comment lol I thought I had better add a postscript, that women and men are very alike in their thoughts reg. relationships sometimes, and you have a way of writing universal poetry. Great Poem Ken

Posted by Kristine Briese on 09/27/03 at 07:27 PM

Oh, Ken. This is as poignantly (did I spell that right?) beautiful as I've learned to expect from you. You have a magical way with language.

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 10/02/03 at 04:57 PM

I really like the distinction of the love "for you" and the love "of you" at the end.

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