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When You Think of Me

by Ken Harnisch

When you think of me, and you will,

Be kind. I am a man of flaws you knew

So very well, and yet, the man you knew

Had his virtues, too, and those, in turn, had their way

Of saving you on rainy days when the world seemed flat

And iron gray.

 

I was no one’s hero.

Save the hero for the fairy tale and let him

Be knightly, bold and true

I was as much the coward as the saint, something no one

Ever saw like you.

But you forgave me, your heart was blessed

With that regard for the dents in men, and I laugh to think

How I proved that true; more than once, my loving friend 

 

Surely in some lofty hall

Where statues mounted in their clay

Proclaim the best of human life you will find

Your visage there some day

And those who come to reverence, awed, will not believe

You were long ignored. But such is the beauty of quiet you:

The more I was lost, the more you knew

 

08/08/2003

Posted on 08/25/2003
Copyright © 2025 Ken Harnisch

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Melissa Arel on 08/25/03 at 05:31 PM

WoW!.. You know, I think this has to be one of your purest writings.. it seems uninhibited and mending in the most wonderful way. I am awed, Ken, really. I can't say enough wonderful things about this one!

Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/29/03 at 05:03 PM

Very honest and touching verse that really details the stregth and frailty of being human. Very well said and quite memorable.

Posted by Don Coffman on 09/03/03 at 10:27 AM

Outstanding poetry here, the form and flow are really good. It's a wonderful image of love and friendship accepting unconditionally.

Posted by Maureen Glaude on 02/19/04 at 06:04 PM

makes me want to cry for sure. Of course we humans sometimes want to and see ourselves in life as potential heroes, but heroes in the classics were always defined by having one tragic flaw, or else they'd be better than human. A tender, wisftul piece, I'm keeping. It reminds me of the poem The Loft, I wrote, and might post soon. though the outcome's different. Thanks.

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