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October Ocean

by Derek Gregory

Quite fall day
A slight chilled breeze
Bearing down
The kids play throwing sand
Our feet touch
We push the sand high and loose
Creating delicate walls
The water rumbles slowly
Towards the castle and moat
I see happiness
I know it wonÂ’t last
The smell of the surf brings
memories of summersÂ’ past
When I thought nothing
could ever go wrong

05/05/2003

Posted on 05/05/2003
Copyright © 2025 Derek Gregory

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kara Hayostek on 05/05/03 at 06:27 AM

Nice little poem, i guess we can all relate to those times (before things went bleak)

Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/07/03 at 04:42 AM

nice poem, though pessimistic.

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