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Simple Closure (haiku)

by Rhodora M Fitzgerald

Dead things wash ashore
where the rocks and waves collide
and the sun departs

04/29/2003

Author's Note: I'm finding out that haikus are a lot harder to write than I thought!

Posted on 04/29/2003
Copyright © 2026 Rhodora M Fitzgerald

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by David R Spellman on 04/29/03 at 08:58 PM

You've managed this one very well. Excellent!

Posted by Kara Hayostek on 05/01/03 at 10:30 AM

I love this haiku!!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/02/03 at 04:55 PM

Very good! Great emotional impact for such a short poem, as a haiku should. :o)

Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 05/03/03 at 03:39 PM

and in your discovery, you are creating beautiful work

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 05/14/03 at 02:25 AM

Very strong first words, choice of words packs a lot of emotion

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