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Mad Stirrings

by Ken Harnisch

She stirred her coffee with a spoon

In this funny counter-clockwise way

That left me almost mesmerized

And thinking it unfair

That such a tiny gesture

Should take advantage of my heart

I stopped breathing for a time.

Maybe I poured another ladleful

Of sugar into my shaky cup;

I can’t remember, it’s all a blur;

But I muttered under my breath

And cursed the stars with fire

For their terrible sense of timing.

One can plan a career, after all,

And lay out his future

The same way his mother

Once laid out his socks

But life is not fond of being

Writ down in a Day-Planner

And love, that vixen,

Likes to punch you in the nose

02/08/2003

Posted on 02/18/2003
Copyright © 2025 Ken Harnisch

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kate Demeree on 02/19/03 at 02:50 PM

I sometimes think it is those small gestures, that are unforgetable, and the most endearing. You capture that and the stutter your heart does when you realize perfectly.

Posted by Amy Niggel on 02/19/03 at 03:35 PM

It is always the small things that seem to matter most, and those that you miss most when they are lost to you. And love my punch you but the bruises somehow are just that more beautiful for thier source. Great work here yet another beautiful poem.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 02/21/03 at 06:55 PM

I really like the tension between our very American bent on planning and our very human need for the unoccupied space needed for love and the spirit.

Posted by Melissa Arel on 02/22/03 at 03:08 PM

I liked this one! :) its very cute.. I agree w/Kate - its those small gestures that mean the most. Hey now I think of it, I stir my coffee counter-clockwise too! LoL..

Posted by JD Clay on 02/22/03 at 09:20 PM

Funny how those little idiosyncrasies often stand in the way. You have shined the beacon of truth on the subject with stirring clarity, Ken. Bravo! Peace...

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/23/03 at 04:27 AM

I like how the poem opens with the speaker noticing such a tiny detail. Somehow, that one detail opens up the whole scene for the readers.

Posted by Kate Demeree on 02/05/14 at 12:12 AM

Still makes me smile Poetman!

Posted by H.M Stevens on 01/20/16 at 02:15 AM

This poem neatly captures how the quietest and smallest of moments can stir us: "such a tiny gesture Should take advantage of my heart" Wow. Captures so much. The whole piece is quite grand.

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