| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 10/17/02 at 03:43 PM *laughing* Thanks for this! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/18/02 at 12:51 AM Cryptic, wry humor, your wit knows no bounds. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 10/18/02 at 01:24 PM -laughing- I love your sense of humour! This is just a hoot! |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 10/19/02 at 06:50 PM jadi, this is so clever, made me go to the glossary... now you've challenged me to try this form... Your poem gaved me a good laugh, but on a more serious note, it reminds me of dreams I've had, born of my old tattered guilted baggage, fear-textured and rebelbound. Sometimes it's hidden deep and sometimes just under the surface - but always there.
Good one, my friend. |
| Posted by Paul Marino on 09/14/05 at 09:19 AM hahaa, this is great. |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 03/09/08 at 04:57 PM Definitely an "aha" moment here... you would never expect that last line. The first two lines predict some tragic occurrence... but no, it's the comedy swat team at work. Has a mock-nightmare feel to it as well, I have had real dreams quite similar to this, and I wake up laughing. |
| Posted by Gilly Wigley on 10/08/11 at 03:11 AM HAHAHA! Love it! |
