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haiku 371

by JD Clay

reflecting pond-
a gnat touched the surface
the moon fell in

~ jadi ~

04/16/2002

Author's Note: Traditionally, American haiku are 17 syllables, but Shiki haiku is less strict, and more interested in substance than structure.

Posted on 04/16/2002
Copyright © 2026 JD Clay

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Ann Krischus on 03/13/03 at 06:13 PM

beautiful. this reminds me of basho.

Posted by Paul Marino on 09/14/05 at 09:12 AM

whoah, that was interesting and cool

Posted by Meghan Helmich on 09/05/08 at 04:15 PM

this is really nice, JD

Posted by A. Paige White on 12/14/10 at 12:12 AM

Awesome.

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