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The Journal of Andrew S Adams just read this one poem...
07/18/2003 04:06 a.m.
hi. i spent alot of time last night composing a poem, 'the bedroom window empire' (i forget what gibberish i actually titled it, but that's the gist of it.). it's the first poem i've ever written in movements. it's a little threadbare right now, but i'm going to enhance the language a little right now. anyways, please read it. it took me forever to write. just read it, and if you feel compelled to comment/criticize, please do so. please. :)
~aa
p.s. if anyone can afford me 6 comments in an hour, that'd be great. i'd have 100 in a month; and 700 overall. I am currently Empty
I am listening to weezer- the good life
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