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We managed to escape

by Sean Rooney

....as the rusty switchblade caught the faint edge of
the tall brown bushes and we could no longer hear his heavy panting.

We hid in hollowed out tree trunks by day
and bottomless snake swamps in the night.

I asked twice about the scars on your cheek,
but your eyes turned from yellow to red to me,
and it wasn't worth the pain.

The stalking owl peered down on us from his
temporary home, while I kept the bugs away
from our muddy faces with a fire that burned underwater forever.

I could feel that old Volkswagen melting into
my body.
My hands were steel and rubber, while my eyes
began to blink at the bottom of the swamp.
Your face became a guard rail, something all too familiar, yet
so distant in memory.

Lets awake the crickets and firefly's and collide with all the passion
of a teenage car crash unsolved.

And while that owl may someday tell our tale, we'll keep re-enacting
Feb 3rd 1998 over and over again.

02/03/2010

Posted on 02/03/2010
Copyright © 2010 Sean Rooney

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Therese Boling on 02/03/10 at 09:10 PM

This is very eerie -I keep being reminded of these distinct elements of the Southern gothic tradition...and it makes everything that much more vivid -and that much more creepy.

Posted by Mike Cablevain on 02/04/10 at 12:18 AM

Wow, dark stuff Sean. Really cool though. I dig it!

Posted by Shannon McEwen on 02/04/10 at 01:25 AM

something about your words never fail to conflict me, on one hand they disturb me and on the other fascinate me. regardless, great imagery here Sean

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