| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Lauren Singer on 07/01/09 at 10:01 PM just lovely. so vivid. |
| Posted by Tom Goss on 07/02/09 at 09:55 AM A lovely moon meandering! |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 07/02/09 at 11:43 PM I loved this read from bottom to top as much as from top to bottom. Your style always makes me wonder if LSD was ever a part of your teenage "trips"! Seriously, you are unique in that you write poems which may be read over and over, the reader garners something new each time. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/05/09 at 10:25 PM The exploration of the facets-cycles-phases of relationship glows into my night, making me think I should haul in the anchor and float free into the full moon night - even if she is but a waxing crescent and I a waning one. Lovely poem. |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 07/06/09 at 01:39 AM Lovely. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/07/09 at 01:52 AM I love Ganesha arms. This is lovely! |
| Posted by Daniel M Ridges on 07/07/09 at 04:35 PM Beautiful, Kathy. Simply wonderful! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 07/08/09 at 06:40 PM You've taken the moon to new heights, Kathabela. I especially like the metaphoric comparison you've drawn between your love and the ominous orb. Each phase plied into an unsuspecting adventure befitting a beat poets dream. I don't know who writes your scripts, honey, but I want the doctor's name. |
