| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Vikki Owens on 01/26/09 at 12:35 PM LOVE that second stanza! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/26/09 at 12:39 PM Definitely wants to make you put on some traveling shoes. Beautiful work, man. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 01/26/09 at 01:25 PM I like this too, Jon. A delicate piece with much reflection. We still have so much to learn about creation if we survive long enough to do so. Nice write.
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| Posted by J. Reed on 01/26/09 at 11:37 PM This is a perfect poem. Everything about it is beautiful. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 01/27/09 at 09:47 AM And now, we -reading, open our arms to What Is |
| Posted by Paul Lorenz on 01/27/09 at 10:15 AM ...i don't know why, but your words always conjure an image of you with a vast, ever changing world swirling around you...worlds evolving while you remain the vortex, the axis...part romance, part science, part belief... |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 01/29/09 at 10:25 AM In this magical piece, a part of me looms, wandering in the universe you describe, blooming in your starlight and drinking in your germination, your words expound and internalize at once, begging to be swallowed whole, as the universe does the soul...what magic your words conjure in me, what more can I say but I love it so! ...I adore what is born upon your pages...peace, jewels |
| Posted by Sarah Wolf on 01/30/09 at 05:29 PM Beautiful... :) |
| Posted by Rebecca Andre on 03/15/09 at 12:43 AM in the vibrant womb of
Quintessential Mind.
i love. thankyou:) |
| Posted by Kris Mara on 04/23/09 at 08:29 AM You have a way with making words flow effortlessly, yet meaningfully down the page and into your reader....superb.
And the Dune reference just makes it all that much better (for those of us who are familiar) :) |
| Posted by D. James McKee on 07/27/09 at 07:14 AM Haunting, lovely, and optimistic an excellent write. Congrats on a well deserved POTD!
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| Posted by Laurie Blum on 07/27/09 at 08:10 AM What a lovely way to start my day! Your words are so articulate and provide the most vivid imagery! Congratulations on POTD. |
| Posted by El McCandless on 07/27/09 at 09:45 AM I agree with Laurie. I'm glad this was my first read for the day. It's lovely. Congratulations, Jon. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/27/09 at 03:36 PM I like that this poem made POTD. I'm so partial to the way you phrase things, your perspective!!! Love it! |
| Posted by Wendy Sparling on 07/27/09 at 04:04 PM Congratulations on your POTD. Beautiful. |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 07/29/09 at 10:12 AM Belated congratulations for this POTD, Jon. Beautiful, a reflection brimming with possibilities. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/20/09 at 03:55 PM Such a sacred place created here, and opened up to the reader. I delight in the stars as ancient seeds, and I think the use of the word "authority" is well chosen. |
