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Ghost In This House

by Tony Whitaker

I sit, in a trance, and see the snow
lightly falling like sifted flour;
a serene scene as I relive, again
the “what” of you and me

I watch you standing there
awash in white satin at aisle's end
you walk between empty gilded pews
all afloat amid warm cotton clouds
of some celestial chapel

A faceless priest gives witness
as our eyes lock in mocked silence
as we exchange muffled vows
which only He can hear

But then, as always, I awake
to no matrimonial victory march
but a sense again of these
shackled feet and hands
amid memories which seem to shuffle
down some damp and darkened street

I feel the tears and years
beneath this withered rind
but I will always cherish
these scars, which outgrew you
and the brilliance of the ore
which we once mined

01/06/2009

Author's Note: I enjoy being "in the moment" of lost love. Call me sick, but it inspires me!

Posted on 01/06/2009
Copyright © 2010 Tony Whitaker

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/06/09 at 10:12 AM

No argument on the inspiration part. This is great work, man.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/06/09 at 01:29 PM

Really a fine piece, Tony!

Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 01/06/09 at 02:45 PM

The imagery is elegant and the message oh so clear, so whatever the inspiration it is worthy of the writing. smh

Posted by Alisa Js on 01/07/09 at 12:20 AM

Aloha Tony....I certainly can relate to this one in a very personal way... .memories.. such awesome memories... alisa ;-0

Posted by Lori Blair on 01/29/09 at 08:20 PM

Beautifully expressed..no matter the time..we seek the past if only just to learn from it somehow. Thanks Tony!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/22/09 at 07:44 PM

Poignant reflection, tenderly and eloquently expressed.

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