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falling asleep
by Jeremy Magee
a stream of water
snaking down a flight
of rounded stairs,
my hands slowly balling up,
eyes closing with careful precision.
02/10/2008 Posted on 02/10/2008
Copyright © 2010 Jeremy Magee
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Barbara Penryn on 02/10/08 at 05:58 PM Wow I love this! I have insomnia like crazy and I'm going to try this visualization! I have a feeling that it will work, for all the reasons that this poem works! |
| Posted by Marie Andreas on 02/10/08 at 06:27 PM Wow! What perfect imagery! Very cool poem :) |
| Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 02/10/08 at 06:58 PM So glad you were able to sleep... . I will not keep you from such precision again. ~N |
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