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Differences

by Rafika Anderson

Twin glass doors impassively observe the meeting of five corners
While construction progresses merrily across the street
Overshadowed by the all-encompassing mosque
Perched center stage between life and death, east and west
Unfailingly announcing calls to the faithful
Throughout the never-ending days morphing into nights

Swarms of scooters buzz arteries sparkling with activity
Weaving through pedestrians and cars

Visitors stream pass white-clad nurses gabbing as gaily as sea gulls
In their impenetrable tongues outside frosty exam rooms

Tribal gatherings whisper in fear, animating dark corridors
Relatives pair before the doors of loved ones
Converting each room into the entrance to Noah’s Ark

Forlorn masks drawn across desperate faces
Hold gloomy eyes dripping regret
Seeking hope from doctors bathed in overpowering colognes
Delivering nausea to sick and well alike

Bouquets adorn the entryways
Permeating sanitized air with their dying breaths
Small red ants crawl amid the flowers
Invaders in a near-pristine environment
Mopped daily
By cleaners impervious to the enemy forces they drag across the ward

Recuperating sleepers clothed in paper gowns
Awakened hourly by conscientious caretakers
Pushing unsolicited food or ineffective medication
Accompanied by a steady assault of loud smells
Competing with even louder cartoons
Blaring in unfathomable accents, yet familiar tones
As they strip away warmth-giving spreads
Force open drapes to shed unwelcome sunlight upon weary sufferers
And proudly share freshly shorn body parts with family members
Proof of the beaming surgeon’s expert skill
With draconian techniques in the midst of modernity

Sad eyes brim with weighty tears
While others shut tight, fervently engage in unheard prayers
To conquer heartless Fates
Peeking into open doors like curious strangers
Intruding on our desire for silence and solitude
As do the ever cheerful thermometer-wielding assistants to the healer

03/06/2005

Author's Note: From the Casablanca collection, "Mists of Marrakesh."

Posted on 12/22/2007
Copyright © 2010 Rafika Anderson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by J. P. Davies on 12/22/07 at 02:35 PM

Fantastic imagery. Extremelly enjoyable use of language throughout. A painting in words.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/22/07 at 02:49 PM

Captivating poetic snapshot, rich with vocabulary and message set to the inspiration that provided it. Good reminder of why I stay away from hospitals as much as possible. Adds to favorites. :o)

Posted by Therese Elaine on 12/22/07 at 04:35 PM

What an utterly compelling and brilliant piece -you've got a way of painting such vivid images with your use of language and rhythm...I am so very impressed with this -my first introduction to your work and I can only say I can't wait to read more!!!

Posted by Barbara Penryn on 12/22/07 at 04:41 PM

A terrific magnifying-glass visit to the dreaded hospital! If you've missed anything, I can't imagine what! Outstanding distillations, each scene absolutely authentic and clear as a bell. Brimming with humanity! Great work!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/22/07 at 07:24 PM

This scene of healing and suffering side by side is so very vivid, with the added foreign flavor (at least to my eyes and ears) of the frequent call to prayers and the smells so often masked or not even present in hospitals I have visited. This is a wonderfully written piece.

Posted by Jon Kary on 12/27/07 at 04:57 PM

Reading your poetry is so close to traveling, experiencing worlds upon worlds within worlds. Thank you, Rafika.

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