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Memorable

brilliant, beautiful surprise

I see a banquet in your eyes

full of life and harmony

I want to share your energy

innocence of spirit fills your gaze

words you say simply amaze

Drawn together by Venus

something's just so right between us

a positive unity

and natural affinity

bring down all my defenses

and awaken sleeping senses

brilliant, beautiful surprise

I see a banquet in your eyes

10/30/2007

Author's Note: From the Home Collection

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/03/07 at 09:32 PM

Lots of rhyme and rhythm!

Posted by Paige Skeen on 12/08/07 at 09:03 AM

I see that same banquet in my beloveds eyes. Beautifully poetic rendering of sigillate telemetry behind blinking lashes.

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