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I am whole while you are asleep by Donald R Beckmaneyes shut so tight
but still she sees
movement in sleep
so vividly she dreams
fingers most delicate
yet strong and firm
but tender and soft
from the keys she's learned
a mind so sharp
but fragile and refined
clever and cute
and a body so fine
she has everything
not just looks or smarts
but most importantly
she has my heart
02/24/2006 Author's Note: I hope someday you will understand how much I've loved you.
Posted on 02/24/2006 Copyright © 2010 Donald R Beckman
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 05/02/06 at 05:35 PM this is a lovely tribute, 1st stanza is my favorite...lucky girl...peace, jewels |
| Posted by Kristi Paik on 05/11/06 at 02:11 PM Beautiful. That's one extremely lucky girl :) |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/23/07 at 08:11 AM this poem displays hearts within hearts in its unfolding. |
| Posted by Morgan Farley on 05/15/09 at 04:14 PM
.....displays indeed. the "loss" of a loved one is hard to bear. when do they know.. is it when its too late?
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