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bitterness

by Shonda Chrissonberry

you make me say
i love you
then you devour the words
like a gooey confection
my sweetness dripping
from those lips
not meant for kissing
only lying
i hope you choke

07/28/2005

Posted on 07/28/2005
Copyright © 2010 Shonda Chrissonberry

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 08/02/05 at 01:00 PM

wow...what a statement this makes...sharp and hard hitting!

Posted by El McCandless on 07/09/07 at 10:07 PM

This packed a punch! To the point, over and done! Well done, even. :)

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