| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/10/03 at 11:15 PM But they keep on vibrating life. |
| Posted by Melina Raven Maness Diebold on 05/11/03 at 12:44 AM Awesome! I can feel that wind and smell those flowers. |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/11/03 at 01:19 AM *achoo* another thing im allergic too. LOL... nothing short of expected from you. =) |
| Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 05/11/03 at 07:00 AM Beautiful image..........
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| Posted by Amy Niggel on 05/11/03 at 02:22 PM mmmm feels like summer to me, thanks for that bit of warmth on this cold rainy day. |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 05/11/03 at 09:32 PM I like the imagery of music vs. the flowers. The font even complements it! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/11/03 at 11:42 PM Simply excellent! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/12/03 at 10:26 PM So good to read another of your great haiku! Wooowoooo! |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 05/14/03 at 10:10 AM very nice :) |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 05/14/03 at 02:20 PM Now, THAT is a true haiku.
Well done, JD, & not surprisingly so. LOL
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| Posted by Kate Demeree on 05/15/03 at 09:52 PM *smiling* the haiku created a one word comment UUUUUUuuuuuuummmmmmmm :o) |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 05/18/03 at 12:30 PM a chorus, yes, i can see all their pretty mouths singing wide and yellow, welcoming summer. well done! |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 08/25/03 at 10:40 AM Oh Yes! They lean us into summer... even the colour is the same as the sun that gets brighter in that season...! Love this, Jadi. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 08/25/03 at 01:17 PM precious :) |
| Posted by Beth K Hannah on 08/25/03 at 01:35 PM lovely. It reminds me of all the beauty of summer. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 08/25/03 at 02:39 PM oh, I love this haiku...it's beautiful...flows so nicely...I am SO impressed |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/10/04 at 01:10 PM Beautiful Haiki, Those daffidils know how to put on a warm welcome. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 03/20/04 at 11:13 PM Hallalulia rings in my ears as my mind's eye passes over your bloom and the fabulous trumpetechoes all around Dallas. I love the soft gentleness of this one, jadi. |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 12/16/06 at 04:14 PM this one speaks to me of a bittersweet love, yet it is love, nonetheless...sweet... |
| Posted by Marie Andreas on 01/21/08 at 10:55 PM The movement and brightness of the imagery holds the perfect piece of summer. Splendid poem :)! |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 06/28/09 at 08:38 AM Angel...lend me these your words that I may serenade to the world how it takes but the space of a breath, pure gold as in this poem, for the spirit to be melodious wind, for the cells to be a chorus of daffodils leaning into summer. Che meraviglia! How marvelous. I was seeking words to define a feeling inside and in this glorious haiku found what I needed. Now I am summersong...lovelight&hugs...*m.a |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 06/29/09 at 08:53 AM Ahhhhh... so this is how they are done! Perfect! |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 06/29/09 at 11:55 PM I love a great haiku. Thank you Jadi for "leaning" us into summer with a taste of "nature's way". |
